Monday, January 08, 2007

#32: Abby the Angel

Abby the Angel

There once was an angel named Abby.

Her demeanor is always unhappy.

But when all sorts of ants

Prowl through poor Abby’s pants,

All her clothing begins to look shabby.

2 comments:

Mary said...

Hi Jeff!

I've read all 33 of your limericks (so far) and I want to say that I think your technique is showing improvement. The rest of my comment I will put into verse:

About limericks it's often been spoken--
And good writers do make it their token--
One may venture sometimes
To mismatch a few rhymes:
But the meter must never be broken.

Keep a-writin', Jeff!

Mary

Mary said...

Hi Jeff!

I've read all 33 of your limericks (so far) and I want to say that I think your technique is showing improvement. The rest of my comment I will put into verse:

About limericks it's often been spoken--
And good writers do make it their token--
One may venture sometimes
To mismatch a few rhymes:
But the meter must never be broken.

Keep a-writin', Jeff!

Mary