A lion was eating a pie.
He suddenly let out a cry.
For his pie was all gone,
And he let out a yawn.
As the sun rose up into the sky.
Revised it a little..............A-little-A Lion was eating a pieHe suddenly let out a cryFor his pie was all goneHe let out a yawnAnd looked up and saw the new DawnWhatcha think?
nice..howecer, lines 12 and five have to ryhme..but...that would make a great suprise ending!
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