Sunday, December 17, 2006

#11: Sunrise

Sunrise

A lion was eating a pie.

He suddenly let out a cry.

For his pie was all gone,

And he let out a yawn.

As the sun rose up into the sky.

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2 comments:

Helena said...

Revised it a little..............A-little-

A Lion was eating a pie
He suddenly let out a cry
For his pie was all gone
He let out a yawn
And looked up and saw the new Dawn

Whatcha think?

10:45 PM
Jeff said...

nice..howecer, lines 12 and five have to ryhme..

but...that would make a great suprise ending!

12:24 PM

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