Limerick Lore: #109: The Jet (cont'd)

Sunday, March 25, 2007

The Jet (cont’d)

When the plane got up into the air

the pilot was quite unaware;

’cause it finally hit

that the gas tank was whit,

leaving them in a state of despair.

Jerrell Allen said...: There once was a man from PV
Who thought writing limericks was neat
He did fairly fine
til he got to the last line.
....ummm....ummm.... glued to his feet?; 11:58 PM
Mary said...: Hey, alien--

Speaking of feet, you've got one too many in line 4, didja notice?

What about having it read,
"Till he reached the last line,
Where a dactyl was glued to his feet!"

Also, purist that I am, I shudder at rhyming "PV/neat" in l.1-l.2.

Would you like to have,
"There once was a man from Takreet
Who thought writing limericks was neat"?

Mary; 9:43 AM

Sunday, March 25, 2007